@ KadsukiSH，再次感谢你的信任、认真，还有如此谦逊的态度。下面是我对你文章的详细改动。
首先是不改动单词，仅通过调整句子顺序来改进作文结构。
Typhoon
Typhoon will bring a lot of rain and strong wind.
There will be many traffic problems.
People will lost a lot of things if typhoon go to the place they live in.
Houses may be gone by typhoon, and people lost their houses and money.
Even, people will lost their life or family.
It is terrible.
Vegetables in farms will die because of typhoon.
Farmers will cry for that and worry about their life.
Nobody really likes typhoon!!
Only students like typhoon because they don't need to go to school.
But, when they lost things because of typhoon, they won't still think so.
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上文的结构是否比原文更清晰？
在此基础上，再改进一下句子的表达：
Typhoon
A typhoon will bring a lot of rain and strong wind. It will cause many traffic problems. It may blow away many of people's belongings along its path. It may even damage houses.People will have to spend a lot of money in order to repairtheir houses and replace their lost belongings. People may even lose their family or their own lives in a typhoon. A typhoon is terrible.
Furthermore, vegetables and other plants on farms will die because of a typhoon that passes their way. Farmers will cry for it and worry about their living.Factories will have to be closed during a typhoon, which may make products unable to reach market on time. The factories' business will be harmed.
Nobody really likes typhoons!!
Only students may like typhoons because they don't need to go to school duringthem.
But, when they suffer loss because of typhoons, they won't still think so.
希望有帮助。欢迎继续交流！也欢迎其他朋友指正！
首先是不改动单词，仅通过调整句子顺序来改进作文结构。
Typhoon
Typhoon will bring a lot of rain and strong wind.
There will be many traffic problems.
People will lost a lot of things if typhoon go to the place they live in.
Houses may be gone by typhoon, and people lost their houses and money.
Even, people will lost their life or family.
It is terrible.
Vegetables in farms will die because of typhoon.
Farmers will cry for that and worry about their life.
Nobody really likes typhoon!!
Only students like typhoon because they don't need to go to school.
But, when they lost things because of typhoon, they won't still think so.
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
上文的结构是否比原文更清晰？
在此基础上，再改进一下句子的表达：
Typhoon
A typhoon will bring a lot of rain and strong wind. It will cause many traffic problems. It may blow away many of people's belongings along its path. It may even damage houses.People will have to spend a lot of money in order to repairtheir houses and replace their lost belongings. People may even lose their family or their own lives in a typhoon. A typhoon is terrible.
Furthermore, vegetables and other plants on farms will die because of a typhoon that passes their way. Farmers will cry for it and worry about their living.Factories will have to be closed during a typhoon, which may make products unable to reach market on time. The factories' business will be harmed.
Nobody really likes typhoons!!
Only students may like typhoons because they don't need to go to school duringthem.
But, when they suffer loss because of typhoons, they won't still think so.
希望有帮助。欢迎继续交流！也欢迎其他朋友指正！