听英文歌学英语(连载)

  careless whisper
  无心快语
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  I feel so unsure
  我是如此矛盾
  As I take your hand and lead you to the dance floor
  牵着你的手领着你走向那舞池
  As the music dies, something in your eyes
  舞曲终了,你异样的眼神
  Calls to mind the silver screen
  令我想起银幕上
  And all its sad good-byes
  悲伤话离别
  
  I'm never gonna dance again
  我没有办法去继续
  Guilty feet have got no rhythm
  愧疚令脚僵硬
  Though it's easy to pretend
  即使在掩饰
  I know you're not a fool
  你还是能察觉
  Should've known better than to cheat a friend
  早知不该欺骗朋友
  And waste the chance that I've been given
  错过应有的机会
  So I'll never gonna dance again
  所以我无法再继续
  The way I danced with you
  如从前与你共舞
  (Never without your love)
  绝不能失去你的爱
  
  Time can never mend
  时间无法抚平
  the careless whispers of a good friend
  朋友无心的快语
  To the heart and mind, ignorance is kind
  这样的伤痛,不如不知道
  There's no comfort in the truth
  现实那样的残酷
  Pain is all you'll find
  总令人痛苦
  
  I'm never gonna dance again
  我没有办法去继续
  Guilty feet have got no rhythm
  愧疚令脚僵硬
  Though it's easy to pretend
  即使在掩饰
  I know you're not a fool
  你还是能察觉
  Should've known better than to cheat a friend
  早知不该欺骗朋友
  And waste the chance that I've been given
  错过应有的机会
  So I'll never gonna dance again
  所以我无法再继续
  The way I danced with you
  如从前与你共舞
  (Never without your love)
  绝不能失去你的爱
  
  Tonight the music seems so loud
  今晚的音乐好刺耳
  I wish that we could lose this crowd
  真希望远离这人群
  Maybe it's better this way
  也許这样才好
  We'd hurt each other with the things we'd want to say
  我们说着彼此伤害的言语
  We could have been so good together
  原本能好好在一起
  We could have lived this dance forever
  我们能永远共舞
  But none's gonna dance with me
  今夜谁与我共舞
  Please stay
  留下吧
  
  I'm never gonna dance again
  我没有办法去继续
  Guilty feet have got no rhythm
  愧疚令脚僵硬
  Though it's easy to pretend
  即使在掩饰
  I know you're not a fool
  你还是能察觉
  Should've known better than to cheat a friend
  早知不该欺骗朋友
  And waste the chance that I've been given
  错过应有的机会
  So I'll never gonna dance again
  所以我无法再继续
  The way I danced with you
  如从前与你共舞
  (Never without your love)
  绝不能失去你的爱
  
  (Now that you're gone) Now that you're gone
  你是真的走了
  (Now that you're gone) was what I did so wrong
  我是真的错了,错了
  That you had to leave me alone
  你就这样离开了我
  This Masquerade
  化妆舞会
  carpenters
  卡朋特
  
  Are we really happy with this lonely game we play
  是真的开心吗?在这寂寞者的游戏里
  Looking for the right words to say
  试探着找些适合的话
  Searching but not finding -- understanding anyway
  怎么也找不到,这是显而易见的
  We're lost in this masquerade
  只是沉浸于这化妆舞会
  
  Both afraid to say we're just too far away
  都害怕说出那真实存在的遥远
  From being close together from the start
  即使从一开始我们就很亲近
  We try to talk it over, but the words got in the way
  试着打开僵局,却依旧无言
  We're lost inside this lonely game we play
  只是沉浸在这寂寞者的游戏里
  
  Thoughts of leaving disappear each time I see your eyes
  每次目光的碰触,我都想逃离
  And no matter how hard I try
  不管多困难都想试试
  To understand the reason why we carry on this way
  去弄清为什么要继续这样
  We're lost in this masquerade
  只是沉浸在这化装舞会上
  
  We try to talk it over, but the words got in the way
  试着打开僵局,却依旧无言
  We're lost inside this lonely game we play
  只是沉浸在这寂寞者的游戏里
  
  Thoughts of leaving disappear each time I see your eyes
  每次目光的碰触,我都想逃离
  And no matter how hard I try
  不管多困难都想试试
  To understand the reason why we carry on this way
  去弄清为什么要继续这样
  We're lost in this masquerade
  只是沉浸在这化装舞会上
  
  We're lost in a masquerade
  只是沉浸在这化装舞会上
  And we're lost in a masquerade
  沉浸在这化装舞会上
  
  
  好久没发英文歌了,自己真的很懒哦,哈哈
  
  今天推荐首绝对经典的,感觉这首词很特别,翻译起来很吃力,也非常勉强,算是对意思理解上有个补充吧,还是看原文强得多,多次试图在韵上达到和谐都失败了,呵,看来还有很长的路要走啊...希望大家能喜欢
  不好意思,搞错了一句,纠正一下:
  
  Thoughts of leaving disappear each time I see your eyes
  每次目光的碰触,离开的想法便消失了
  --------这个前面贴有的,因为觉得前面译得不是很顺畅,所以贴上来
  ===========================================================
  
  谢谢.
  
  不过我的翻译是意译不是直译,而且我是做到尽量可以把中文套在歌里唱的,所以在字数上也有一定的要求,呵呵.
  
  很感谢你的补充.
  楼主,能不能把can you feel the love tonight? Elton john 的中文歌词贴出来,谢了
  ============================
  这首歌前面有
  TO 看花开落
  ===============
  谢谢你的支持
  
  你觉得不顺畅是因为我试图把译出的中国能套在歌里跟唱,你可以试试:) 所以在字数上我会尽量配合歌曲的长短
  
  再说用更多的字才能表达清晰意思本身是对文字的把握不够,哈哈
  翻译要注意语义,作者的文风,对歌曲而言,要把握韵味,在字数上做到能中文套唱,这是我的目标,翻译时一定会将歌听不下于一百遍,对作者感情的理解,对原意从音乐上的理解,我不敢说是最好的,但比网上的那些一定是好得多的,试交流第一段吧(你最好先听下这首歌)
  
  全歌有一种不屈和执着,是一种爱的阐释,是不种不顾被爱人情感的执着,言语简练而简捷,甚至有些小女孩的固执,很有韵味
  
  以第一段为例:我的翻译如下
  
  i know you think that i shouldn't still love you
  我知,你认为,我不会再爱你
  i'll tell you that
  让我告诉你
  but if i didn't say it well, i'd still have felt it
  纵使我不说它我也还是感受着
  where's the sense in that?
  这样的感受从哪儿来?
  =============================
  看网上的翻译:
  
  i know you think that i shouldn't still love you
  我知道你觉得我不该还爱着你
  i'll tell you that
  甚至不该说出口
  but if i didn't say it well, i'd still have felt it
  但就算不说但我依然能感受到我的爱
  where's the sense in that?
  这么做对我又有什么意义
  =====================================
  我想你不用听歌,就对比这段中文,你就会知道哪个更贴切一些了
  
  网上的翻译从中文意思上根本不通,如第二句甚至不该说出口,说出口什么?"我不该爱你"这个意思,那后面两句更是接不上了,错得太远.
  
  其实原文意思是,我心里还爱着你,但你以为我放弃了,但我想对你说,就算我不强调我心里还爱着你,它(指感受)依然很强烈,这样的爱的感觉从哪里来的呢?(后文有解释)
  
  再理解下?看网上那段翻译有没有翻译错?如果你套到歌里去唱,就差得更远了,如果你听了歌后,对曲风有了一定理解,再看中文呢?是不是很哆嗦和繁琐?而原歌是不是铿锵有力,很简洁.
  
  以上仅为交流,欢迎讨论
  而后一段翻译意思基本翻反了
  
  甚至不该说出口?为什么不该说?全文一直在说这种情感,为什么不该说呢?
  
  对我有什么意义?当然有意义,这是一种爱的执着,因为作者永远不会举起白旗(不投降,不屈服),就是这样,那为什么说对我没有意义?这不是一种表达失败情绪的歌曲,而是要顽强地告诉被爱人,我,爱着你,而且很强烈的,虽然不知道将来或者你对我的情感如何,我,爱着你,而且不会举起白旗.
  
  听听歌吧,歌很好听的,呵呵
  贴出来方便大家研究一下:
  
  PS:增强兴趣,你套着唱,这样会上瘾的,哈哈
  
  i know you think that i shouldn't still love you
    我知,你认为,我不会再爱你
    i'll tell you that
    让我告诉你
    but if i didn't say it well, i'd still have felt it
    纵使我不说它我也还是感受着
    where's the sense in that?
    这样的感受从哪儿来?
    
    i promise i'm not trying to make your life harder
    我承诺我绝不会打乱你的生活
    or return to where we were
    也不会重蹈覆辙
    
    well i will go down with this ship
    我会继续我的航程
    and i won't put my hands up and surrender
    绝不会举手投降和退缩
    there will be no white flag above my door
    我的门前永远不会打出白旗
    i'm in love and always will be
    我爱着,一直爱着
    
    i know i left too much mess and destruction to come back again
    我知我是太混乱与茫然,以至无法象从前那样
    and i caused nothing but trouble
    除了麻烦还是麻烦
    i understand if you can't talk to me again
    我明白,如果你不再理我
    and if you live by the rules of "it's over"
    如果你坚守的原则是"到此为止"
    then i'm sure that that makes sense
    那么我确信它就源于此
    
    well i will go down with this ship
    我会继续我的航程
    and i won't put my hands up and surrender
    绝不会举手投降和退缩
    there will be no white flag above my door
    我的门前永远不会打出白旗
    i'm in love and always will be
    我爱着,一直爱着
    
    and when we meet as i'm sure we will
    我们如期相遇,冥冥之中的
    all that was then will be there still
    一切在那,始终会在那
    i'll let it pass and hold my tongue
    我会放纵思绪并保持沉默
    and you will think that i've moved on
    你就会感受到我这份执着
    
    well i will go down with this ship
    我会继续我的航程
    and i won't put my hands up and surrender
    绝不会举手投降和退缩
    there will be no white flag above my door
    我的门前永远不会打出白旗
    i'm in love and always will be
    我爱着,一直爱着
  哈哈,回来看下自己老贴,也淘几首歌听听
  
  没想到时间就这样过了一年了......发两首新译送给大家
  
  Fallin'
  执迷
  Alicia Keys
  
  I keep on fallin'
  我即爱着你
  In and out of love with you
  又很怕爱上你
  Sometimes I love ya
  时而我恋你
  Sometimes u make me blue
  时而我感到忧郁
  Sometimes I feel good
  时而是乐趣
  At times I feel used
  有时亦恐惧
  Lovin you darlin'
  宝贝我爱你
  Makes me so confused
  混乱是我心绪
  I keep on fallin'
  我既爱着你
  In and out of love with you
  又很怕爱上你
  I never loved someone
  我从未对别人
  The way that I love you
  如对你般的感触
  Oh, oh , I never felt this way
  哦...我从没这种感触
  How do you give me so much pleasure
  你竟带给我如此多的欢愉
  And cause me so much pain
  如此多的痛楚
  Just when I think
  我只是思考着
  Ive taken more than would a fool
  投入更多是不是一种痴愚
  I start fallin' back in love with you
  我试着收回对你情感的投入
  I keep on fallin'
  我即爱着你
  In and out of love with you
  又很怕爱上你
  I never loved someone
  我从未对别人
  The way that I love you
  如对你般的感触
  Oh baby
  哦.宝贝
  I, I, I, I'm fallin' fall
  乱乱乱乱乱啊...
  I keep on fallin'
  我即爱着你
  In and out of love with you
  又很怕爱上你
  I never loved someone
  我从未对别人
  The way that I love you
  如对你般的感触
  I keep on fallin'
  我即爱着你
  In and out of love with you
  又很怕爱上你
  I never loved someone
  我从未对别人
  The way that I love you
  如对你般的感触
  I keep on fallin'
  我即爱着你
  In and out of love with you
  又很怕爱上你
  I never loved someone
  我从未对别人
  The way that I love you
  如对你般的感触
  
  浑浑噩噩过日子,时间真是快,大家有什么好歌发给我啊,谢了
  
   You've got a way
  溶入我心田
  Shania Twain
  
  You've got a way with me
  溶入我心是你
  Somehow you got me to believe
  总能令我深信不疑
  In everything that I could be
  于我所做的一切
  I've gotta say-you really got a way
  不得不说,你已溶入我心迹
  You've got a way it seems
  溶入我心无隙
  You gave me faith to find my dreams
  予我寻梦信念的是你
  You'll never know just what that means
  你却不知其间的深意
  Can't you see... you got a way with me
  知道吗...溶入我心是你
  It's in the way you want me
  是你我真情不移
  It's in the way you hold me
  是你我心的相依
  The way you show me just what love's made of
  深植我心是爱的默契
  It's in the way we make love
  你我爱的默契
  You've got a way with words
  你的柔情语义
  You get me smiling even when it hurts
  纵使犀利我也依旧欢喜
  There's no way to measure what your love is worth
  你的情宜真是无可比拟
  I can't believe the way you get through to me
  难以置信这心有灵犀
  It's in the way you want me
  是你我真情不移
  It's in the way you hold me
  是你我心的相依
  The way you show me just what love's made of
  深植我心是爱的默契
  It's in the way we make love
  你我爱的默契
  Oh, how I adore you
  啊,我好爱慕你
  Like no one before you
  那唯一的你
  I love you just the way you are
  如你对我般地爱你
  It's in the way you want me
  是你我真情不移
  It's in the way you hold me
  是你我心的相依
  The way you show me just what love's made of
  深植我心是爱的默契
  It's in the way we make love
  你我爱的默契
  It's just the way you are
  是真地爱你
  
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