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固然在雅思写作中，肯定要用到简单句，但是能够写出 lengthy and complex (冗长且复杂）的句子是关系到雅思写作能否上7分的关键，正如雅思官方评分标准所叙述的那样：
Band 7 Band Descriptors (Grammatical range and accuracy)
uses a variety of complex structures
produces frequent error-free sentences
has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors
其实很多时候，冗长繁琐的句子代表的不仅仅是一种高分句型，更是一种写作思维方式，体现了雅思写作的客观、正式以及学术辩证性。
今天小编总结了以下五种重要雅思思维技巧，希望能帮你提升雅思学术写作风格，并助你写出冗长繁琐句子：
1）使用reasoning 思维, 用连词 because/since/as 拓长句子
Example：Art subjects should be incorporated into the school curriculum because art education can contribute to students’ academic performance.
艺术课需要纳入学校课程之中因为艺术教育可以提高学生的学习成绩
2）融入concession（让步）思维，用 although/while 等拓长句子句子
Although many people perceive art courses to be peripheral, I think they are a crucial part of education and should be included in the syllabus of every school.
尽管很多人将艺术课程视为边缘课程，我认为它们是教育的重要组成部分，每一所学校都应将其纳入教学大纲。
3) 融入hedging （拐弯抹角、不直接说、避免绝对的说法）思维，用谨慎的语言比如 it seems that/it appears that/it is possible that 来拓长句子长度
“It is possible that the government is responsible for increased habitat destruction and environmental degradation."
栖居地的持续破坏以及环境恶化很有可能是政府的责任
4）使用impersonal style (不带个人色彩）语言思维，避免使用 “I”, “my”, “you”, “your”, “we” and “our”, 可以用“it” 作为空主语加被动语态来说明其他人的观点比如“it has long been recognized that/ it is generally agreed that/it is thought that/it is widely claimed that 来拓长句子长度
“It used to be thought that the events that changed the world were things like big bombs, maniac politicians, huge earthquakes, or vast population movements, but it has now been realized that this is a very old-fashioned view held by people totally out of touch with modern thought.
过去人们常常认为改变世界的都是一些诸如原子弹爆炸、疯狂的政客、大地震以及巨大的人口迁徙等这样的大事件，然而现在很多人认识到这是一种由失去现代思考能力的人所持有的过时的观点
It is widely claimed that children are spending less time reading these days, but recent research suggests……………………………….
5) 使用细化思维，用which/that 定语从句拓展细节来拓长句子
Governments should ensure that adequate legislation and controls that will harshly penalize environmental criminals are in place, such as imposing large fines on corporations which have committed criminal acts of pollution or illegal discharge of untreated sewage materials.
政府应该确保实行能够严格惩罚环境罪犯的法律法规，比如对那些犯过环境污染罪或者非法排污的企业处以大额罚款。
Long and complex sentences as stated above are needed in academic writing. Try to write lengthy and complex sentences in your IELTS Writing Test while varying your sentence types, patterns and lengths.
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